Wednesday, May 19, 2010

The Cockatoo River Incident edited

Got most of my typos out today. I really need to buy a copy of Word.

Also added a few lines to explain why we did not come to the rescue will ALL guns blazing.

Carrying on from Out of the frying pan, we are still on the Agent Provocateur mission.

Not everyone gets a happy ending...


Now after Word has gotten most of the cock-ups, I'm going through line-by line looking for the rest.

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